Author: Avery Williams
Series: Incarnation #1
Publisher: Simon & Schuster Books For Young Readers
Find it here: Amazon, Goodreads
Source: Purchased
Seraphina has been alive since the 1300's, made immortal when the boy she was beginning to love back then, Cyrus, saved her from death with a strange liquid - a method of alchemy that lets them swap bodies with any human being. But now, in modern day America, Sera has decided that she can no longer bear the weight of stealing people's lives so she can keep living on. So she decides to run away from Cyrus and end her stolen existence once and for all. Her plan goes awry when she accidentally takes the body of a dying teenager and feels forced to take over her life. When the lines between Sera and Kailey's identity begin to blur, Sera finds a reason to desire to live once more. But she can't shake the guilt of having taken Kailey's life, even if she was dying. And what if Cyrus finds her?
My thoughts:
When I first picked up The Alchemy of
Forever I was super excited but the cover is just gorgeous and the
synopsis sounded amazing! I also needed a book by a debut author for
January but that's beside the point. But in the end I was a tab bit
disappointed because of the direction it went.
When I started the book, I just ate up
the beginning. I thought it was an original and unique idea of being
able to separate the soul from the body therefore living as long as
they desired. Seraphina comes by this existence by accident when she
is stabbed. Her good friend Cyrus is the son of the town's alchemist
and they believed they had found a way to separate the soul from the
body. They had not tried it yet but since she was dying, he felt
like he had no choice and her soul is put into the body of a near-by
servant girl. Fast forward almost 800 years where Cyrus, Seraphina
and a few others that they've picked up along the way are living in
New York. Over the years, Cyrus has become controlling and doesn't
let Seraphina out of his sight and she is dying to get away from and
to finally die. She makes makes this whole elaborate plot to escape
and then it kind of becomes a normal story of a girl just trying to
be a teenager and fitting in.
I felt like the story went a little bit
downhill from there. It became boring because it was just
chronicling the life of a girl who was trying to become the girl of
the body she stole. She knew that if she ran away from Cyrus that he
was going to do everything in his power to find her. I was just
annoyed by how easily she let her guard down and just seemed to
forget that Cyrus was looking for her. If felt like there could have
been more to the story but maybe the author is just saving all the
good stuff for the next book! I give The Alchemy of Forever 3 hearts
for originality and creativity with the hope that the next book will
be more exciting.
1 comments:
I was pretty let down by the direction the story went, too. I loved the idea, like you, and the beginning really pulled me in. Hopefully, like you said, she's saved all the really good stuff for book two. Thanks for the honest review :0)
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